Stillness

by Mrs. Chicken on February 19, 2008

The house is empty.

The man left for work, the child for school. The frigid February sun filters in through the slatted blinds. The air is cold, quiet.

Upstairs, she sits on the bed. Golden curtains hang, still closed against the night. Sheets and blankets tangled from a restless sleep, a lone sock lies on the floor. Her eyes flutter shut.

Leaning back she hears the old pillow sigh and the bedsprings creak. The house is still, so still. The baby monitor hums, transmitting only the emptiness of the nursery.

Laundry awaits and the dishwasher beckons. Sticky floors whisper her name. The vacuum cleaner stands expectantly in the hallway. Wrinkling her nose, she catches the scent of sheets in need of changing.

But the silence, it lulls her. Slowly, slowly, she pulls off her clothes and reaches for the blanket. Turning her face to the thin warmth of winter sunshine, she rests, all alone.

She dreams in green and gold.

{ 18 comments… read them below or add one }

LawyerMama February 19, 2008 at 1:02 pm

Ah, that sounds like heaven….

Lauren February 19, 2008 at 1:38 pm

Mmmm. Sounds like my morning. And it is heaven….

Heather February 19, 2008 at 4:20 pm

Mmmm. A nap sounds great right now.

Carrie February 19, 2008 at 5:44 pm

I’d like to crawl into my bed right about now . . .

amanda February 19, 2008 at 6:01 pm

yeah for your well deserved stillness!

Y February 19, 2008 at 6:36 pm

What I wouldn’t give for a moment of stillness.

You’re such a great writer.

InTheFastLane February 19, 2008 at 7:58 pm

How much do I have to pay for some of that?

LifeAsIKnowIt February 19, 2008 at 8:00 pm

Embrace the stillness. It won’t always be there, but the laundry, the dishwasher, the dirty floors will be. They can wait. A peaceful house should be appreciated and sunk into.

flutter February 19, 2008 at 9:34 pm

oh this gave me chills

furiousball February 19, 2008 at 9:50 pm

I dream in periwinkle blue, the most majestic of all the 64 colors.

merlotmom February 19, 2008 at 11:35 pm

I almost fell asleep while reading your blog – delicious.

Doodaddy February 19, 2008 at 11:45 pm

How long before you miss the din, though?

Becky February 20, 2008 at 5:06 am

Gorgeous! Makes me want to lay down and take a nap in the sunlight…only I just got up and the suns not up yet! :)

Becky February 20, 2008 at 11:14 am

This is so nice:) Makes me want to snuggle with the kids today at naptime:)

Jenni February 20, 2008 at 7:03 pm

You paint pictures, lady!

Arkie Mama February 20, 2008 at 11:44 pm

Those moments are so rare. Beautiful description.

andi February 20, 2008 at 11:50 pm

Tomorrow when my kids are squealing at the tops of their lungs, I will picture this and smile. Maybe for a moment it will still me. Thank you.

Kimberly February 21, 2008 at 7:24 pm

Good for you! Those moments are precious and they’ll be even rarer once the new baby is here. Enjoy them.

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